Really cute! Though I think you might've uploaded a version with no music on it? If not, then I think some music would make it really cool. Otherwise, good submission!!!!
Really cute! Though I think you might've uploaded a version with no music on it? If not, then I think some music would make it really cool. Otherwise, good submission!!!!
yeah !! last year i tried to upload the "beta" version of this but I didn't know how to delete it so i left it like that hehe
Ah man, just how MANY toads did you have to render? Also which one is your favorite?
There is around 4,000 in there. I think i like the part in the end where they all hits the saws the most.
Hey weird thing, so I remember seeing this animation on Snapchat from Gametoons or something like that, and I'm just wondering if you gave them permission to upload it.
Yeah for better or worse I did give them permission, but lets just say I won't be doing anything like that again. Thanks for letting me know tho, I appreciate it.
I like how you can barely make out Tricky saying "GET THE SWEET N SOUR NOT BARBEQUE" in the McDonalds, nice touch!
Neat animation, though I felt Hank himself should've stayed still as it felt a lil weird for him to move for no real reason (besides the rotation, I felt that was fine).
Thanks! To explain the Hank Moving around a lot,The Characters in Madness would fumble around so I was somewhat trying to duplicate it.
I Extremely Appreciate the criticism!
As somebody new to the "StickSchool" series, I'd have to say that this is a pretty neat animation and despite knowing next to nothing, this is a pretty neat, yet simple story.
However, there are a few things that I felt could've been done differently:
1. For the reoccuring shots of the school, I feel you should have a slower yet still fast jingle (like 3-6 seconds if possible), so that away it doesn't feel too jarring.
2. The MrBeast scene would've worked better with the writing if you showed him doing something really charitable (for example donating to a hospital like in the video where MrBeast and his team donates $100,000 to various hospitals).
3. During the scene where the guys go fishing, I feel the shot would've worked better if you not had moved the background as they aren't really moving.
4. At the beginning after he said "Uh right, what he said", it would better to replace the school shot with a "After Class" time card.
Also I feel as if the clouds on top in the intro need to be removed as they have been cropped weirdly.
But overall, I do really like how it's a nice simple animation made by somebody clearly passionate in the craft, and hope you can continue to make some neato animations cause I can see you have some talent :)
Thank you, I will try to improve as much as I can!
This is a pretty funny animation and that is really good at recreating an old Flash animation. Especially considering you used Vegas Pro 13. Honestly though I felt the font (at the beginning and end) should've been different to really sell the aesthetic close to home, but besides that I like it! But yeah, I like this "rip" and I find it weird to see this again (on Newgrounds too!)
I will keep that in mind if I make more! Thank you for the feedback!
That is me when I wait for my game to load.
But yeah, I do like the exaggeration of the premise of a game taking a long time to load up, good call. The animation also is simple, but effective. However I do feel you need to work on your coloring as you can see the remains of the fill bucket tool (I would fill with the bucket tool and THEN go over with a pencil/brush tool).
But overall, it's nice yet simple.
Thanks for the advice my animations have improved a lot
Very cute animation! I love the twist and the sonic references are cute :)
Also congrats on getting on the frontpage WHILE IN JUDGEMENT! :O
I'm very shocked myself haha, thank you so much, I am in debt to that blue hedgehog, there are probably references that are subconcious.
I am a stinky guy who might make a thing or two here IDK
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