SususususMan's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Madness Combat 11.5]

I like how you can barely make out Tricky saying "GET THE SWEET N SOUR NOT BARBEQUE" in the McDonalds, nice touch!

Neat animation, though I felt Hank himself should've stayed still as it felt a lil weird for him to move for no real reason (besides the rotation, I felt that was fine).

EndiAnimates responds:

Thanks! To explain the Hank Moving around a lot,The Characters in Madness would fumble around so I was somewhat trying to duplicate it.

I Extremely Appreciate the criticism!

[StickSchool Episode 5: The New Kid]

As somebody new to the "StickSchool" series, I'd have to say that this is a pretty neat animation and despite knowing next to nothing, this is a pretty neat, yet simple story.

However, there are a few things that I felt could've been done differently:

1. For the reoccuring shots of the school, I feel you should have a slower yet still fast jingle (like 3-6 seconds if possible), so that away it doesn't feel too jarring.
2. The MrBeast scene would've worked better with the writing if you showed him doing something really charitable (for example donating to a hospital like in the video where MrBeast and his team donates $100,000 to various hospitals).
3. During the scene where the guys go fishing, I feel the shot would've worked better if you not had moved the background as they aren't really moving.
4. At the beginning after he said "Uh right, what he said", it would better to replace the school shot with a "After Class" time card.

Also I feel as if the clouds on top in the intro need to be removed as they have been cropped weirdly.

But overall, I do really like how it's a nice simple animation made by somebody clearly passionate in the craft, and hope you can continue to make some neato animations cause I can see you have some talent :)

StickSchoolStudios responds:

Thank you, I will try to improve as much as I can!

[Samurai Jack Reanimated (OPEN)]

Good showcase! I'm eager to see how this turns out!!

[Kirby Fighters 2]

This is a pretty funny animation and that is really good at recreating an old Flash animation. Especially considering you used Vegas Pro 13. Honestly though I felt the font (at the beginning and end) should've been different to really sell the aesthetic close to home, but besides that I like it! But yeah, I like this "rip" and I find it weird to see this again (on Newgrounds too!)

Grambam36 responds:

I will keep that in mind if I make more! Thank you for the feedback!

[Waiting for a game to load]

That is me when I wait for my game to load.

But yeah, I do like the exaggeration of the premise of a game taking a long time to load up, good call. The animation also is simple, but effective. However I do feel you need to work on your coloring as you can see the remains of the fill bucket tool (I would fill with the bucket tool and THEN go over with a pencil/brush tool).

But overall, it's nice yet simple.

thecoolyoutubegamer responds:

Thanks for the advice my animations have improved a lot

[Funkin Week One]

I like this and I'm happy Week 1 is still getting some animations. Honestly though for the future, you should work on keeping consistency (like for example with the BF's shorts in the last frame, as well as the positioning of Daddy Dearest while he did the Fortnite dance). But overall, this was a pretty entertaining short and I really liked the jokes, especially the quick lil' gags like the Among Us face :)

[Touhou Project ~ The Embodiment of Scarlet Devil]

I love this animation and how it's a (mostly) silent film and the quick snappy jokes (especially in the visual department) are really good. The ending is really well done and it blew me away on well it was executed! :)

Also making Flandere Scarlet resemble Marx from the Kirby series (whether intentional or not) is a really good touch.

Overall, really good regardless on whether you've played Touhou or not

[SO A MOUSE WALKS INTO A BAR]

Very cute animation! I love the twist and the sonic references are cute :)

Also congrats on getting on the frontpage WHILE IN JUDGEMENT! :O

thecooldrawingguy responds:

I'm very shocked myself haha, thank you so much, I am in debt to that blue hedgehog, there are probably references that are subconcious.

[Wario Robs a Museum]

Wario, how could you? I trusted you in not stealing from local attractions in order to get a quick profit. I ensured that you would've obtained the funds to purchase such an allusive item via legitimate means. Now look at yourself, can you look at yourself and say you're proud of your actions?

[Teddy Bear Panic: SCAD 2021 Thesis Film]

This is really cute! I thought it was going to take a darker turn, but this is a nice and wholesome animation!